Midas is king and he holds me so tightÌèäàñ äà Çîëîòàÿ Àíòèëîïà òóò æå âñïîìèíàþòñÿ :)
And turns me to gold in the sunlight...
(Florence and the Machine)
À ñêàçêà ñêëàäíàÿ, âñ¸ êðàòêî è ¸ìêî, íî â âîîáðàæåíèè ðèñóåòñÿ; ïðåäñêàçóåìàÿ, íî ýòî äëÿ ñêàçîê ïðîñòèòåëüíî.
Âîò òîëüêî êàç¸ííûé ÿçûê âðîäå "ïîäóìûâàë î ðàñøèðåíèè ñâîåé äåÿòåëüíîñòè" òî è äåëî âêëèíèâàåòñÿ â ïîâåñòâîâàíèå, íàðóøàÿ ñòðîéíîñòü.
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29.09.2012, 21:54 #8
Ïîñëåäíèé ðàç ðåäàêòèðîâàëîñü A RabbitHearted Girl; 29.09.2012 â 23:56.
No more rabbits in my hat to make things right.
Îòâåòèòü ñ öèòèðîâàíèåì